I've decided to post a short series of poems I wrote five or so years ago—the first real public exhibition of my work. I had a lot of fun trying my hand at poetry at the time, and I've recently begun to dabble a bit once more. Perhaps some of the less embarrassing examples will find their way onto this blog.
The following poem was one of my first, written very much in a self-conscious epic style typical of the Romantics. Though the poem begins—in emblematic Romantic fashion—by extolling the glory of the classical era, the second half does an about-face and exhibits some modern skepticism viz. the "false reverence" paid to the vision of Ancient Rome.
Comments/mockery, as always, are welcome. Enjoy.
The following poem was one of my first, written very much in a self-conscious epic style typical of the Romantics. Though the poem begins—in emblematic Romantic fashion—by extolling the glory of the classical era, the second half does an about-face and exhibits some modern skepticism viz. the "false reverence" paid to the vision of Ancient Rome.
Comments/mockery, as always, are welcome. Enjoy.
The Glory of Rome (?)
I walked with you on Tiber's bank,
When all
of Rome did sleep;
Her
waters rose up, foul and rank,
Called
forth by summer heat;
The full
moon dashed with muted force
Upon a
dome of glare,
And no
point on the river’s course,
Did her
reflection bear;
The city
choked on her own breath,
And
hacked it up in plumes,
Which
pressed upon our lungs like death,
These
sulfur-laden fumes;
We stood
upon an ancient tomb,
A
thousand levels deep,
With
skeletons lying half-exhumed,
Protruding
in the streets;

